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This is a "short" story of my Oc, Sneaky Shadow who escapes from the deepest part of Tartarus, after accepting his dark true self. Sorry if my grammar sucks, but i do hope some of you enjoy it.

W-Where am i? Wh-Why i can't move or speak!!?*Sneaky freaked out, trying to figure out why he wasn't able to move or talk* i...i feel like a stone all of my muscles are numb....the last thing i remember was....being hunted down....b-by...*he gasped mentally* Twilight Sparkle and her friends...after i left Fillydelphia i somehow got teleported to Ponyville and being chased around by them......*he heard a few drops of water hitting his head, but  felt nothing*

I....I went into that forest, T-The Everfree Forest i think that's its name, that cyan pegasus tackled me into the ground and that farmer pony tried to tie me up. Somehow i managed to make them crash and argue, the shy pegasus got mad at me when i made the cannon of the pink one blow up and covered that fashionista pony's coat in confetti, that stare of hers made my blood ran cold.
A-After that i went inside an old castle, bu-but got blasted to a wall by Twilight who got there before her friends......after that i got chained up, beaten and finally.......blasted by the elements of harmony!!!

S-So that means....they turned me into a statue.....that'd explain why i can't move or talk b-but where am i? I can't hear any voice, so that means i'm not "decorating" a garden....focus Sneaky....break free or at least the head to see where are we being locked*he used any magic he had left and focused that to his eyes to see where he was.....but all he saw was darkness* th-this doesn't make any sense!!!  Where did they put me!!!?*his rage was getting bigger and the statue started to crack* WHERE IS THIS PLACE!!!!!*a wave of magic make the statue shake and getting more cracks on it*

"This......is Tartarus"*a voice echoed in Sneaky's head* T-Tartarus!!!? Thi-This can't be*the voice echoed one more "Well wake up and face reality, kid. You're trapped in a statue cage and they threw you in the deepest part of this hell hole, better make yourself comfortable".* i....i won't let that smartass of princess Twilight Sparkle have the satisfaction of leaving me here to rot!!!!*the angry he was getting the more the statue was shaking and the voice asked "And what are YOU waiting for? Embrace your rage and FREE YOURSELF OF THE CAGE THAT KEEPS YOU HERE!!!!"*

I WILL ASCEND AND BE FREE!!!!*the statue broke completely and from its pieces, Sneaky flew to the surface of Tartarus using his bat-pony wings that appeared after releasing his true self. He could feel the light of the sun, shining in the distance* CHARGE MY LOCKED COMRADES!!!! Your liberation has come!!!*Sneaky focused his new magic to break every single prisoner's chain and cell door, releasing them with the exception of an old looking centaur* You deserve to rot here in this hell for the rest of your life.......Tirek*he charged to the freedom as the prisoners started a riot, sneaky folded his wings and with a cold smirk on his face he started to fly, noticing how Cerberus chased all the prisoners he released and smirked thinking: the pawns go first, i only free them, their safety its not my problem. Right now i need to focuse on my main objective* You'll wish that i died in that hole Twilight, cause i'm coming for you and your friends.

I know you'll come here and help Cerberus to lock again the prisoners. They are only a mean to an end, a tool to get you distracted while i work on my revenge*he laughed as he flew away*

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shadow59127 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student General Artist
Thank you for the fav :huggle:
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Zalokin Featured By Owner 3 days ago
You're welcome :3
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Pony4Koma Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Thanks for theFavorites Icon 3D:rarity: 
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Zalokin Featured By Owner 3 days ago
You're welcome :D
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Keithsterling Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Zalokin don't worry about the second note I sent....just the first one.
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Zalokin Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017
Ok Keith.
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Keithsterling Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Here some background for an RP.....maybe short one....using Alysia and Black shadow ashes using the idea of the familiar magic blips in the royal palace.

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After Alysia was fully healing her and black shadow decided to celebrate the defeat of the Crystal Empire with their unit members in a restaurant in canterlot. During the celebrate it got a bit out of hoof went rival unit walked into the same restaurant. It remain calm for long time, till both units start to make fun of each other. That start a huge fight in establishment, the owner of place called the Solar Guard Military police. Who came to break up the fight and haul all parties to jail...Both of you thought it fine as long as your father's don't find out what happen. But Grand Prince Somnus and Baron Sheaky shadow and Grand Princess Aurora were their helping black shadow's father to get more Solar Guard Military Police officers in Side saddle because it was growing.  Went they found out that you two were both in jail they were not to happy about it....Because Grand Princess Aurora is ruling princess they left the punishment up to her...she put you both on the duty you both don't like palace guard duty. 
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Zalokin Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017
I like it Keith.
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Keithsterling Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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Zalokin Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2017
No problem.
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